The Weathermen Part 18 FINAL Chapter
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elwinglyrePart 18 -- final chapter
Jack turned it off, then handed it to me. I had Nefarious in a headlock, and she was struggling against me in a compromising way.
Horny bitch.
"I knew I should have used the smaller model for faster access," she said.
"We prefer the real thing, which you don't have, honey," I chuckled. But even as we savored our victory over her, we both noticed something was wrong. I felt it, and it wasn't Nefarious. It was...
The reactor!
We both heard a loud grinding, then a high-pitched hum. "Holy, fuck!" Jack yelled.
"We only have minutes until the device overloads," she explained.
"What?!" I said. "Is this some sick James Bond flick?!"
"Yes, and you need to rescue the beautiful woman, then fuck her silly," Nefarious suggested.
"Well, I'll save you for old time's sake, but that's it. After all, you just tried to fuck me up the ass with that monstrosity."
"Girls just wanna have fun."
I decided, no way was Jack gonna rescue her. So I'm the one who lifted her up, up and away. We flew off just as the place imploded. Kind of anti-climactic. I guess I'd have to get my big climax later after we dropped off Nefarious to the authorities.
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"That's it! Right there. Fuck me, Jack Twist! Fuck me harder! There! Yes! Harder!!!"
It was a great end to my week having Jack in my end. And he couldn't have come at a better time.
But there was something missing as I looked up at the ceiling.
"You know," I said. "I haven't heard you mention those three little words."
"Fuck me harder?"
"No!" I rolled over and looked into those deep-blue eyes and let my finger play against those perfect lips. "Those three special words two people say to each other when they deeply care for each other-- you know..."
"I was wrong?"
"No."
"Coke or Pepsi?" he kissed me, laughing. He was such a fucking tease. "Oh, I get it." But he just looked at me with that smart-ass Jack Twist grin.
"Well?" I said. "I'm waiting."
"I love you," he said, kissing me again. "Now you say four words."
"I. Love. You. Too." I flipped him over. "Now let me hear those other three words."
Hearing Jack yell "fuck me harder" never sounded so sweet. Even superheroes need love.
The End
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Date: 2009-08-04 04:19 pm (UTC)Thank you !
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:31 pm (UTC)el
This was fun
Date: 2009-08-04 04:38 pm (UTC)Re: This was fun
Date: 2009-08-04 07:32 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 04:42 pm (UTC)Thank you for sharing this, it helped chase away many sad days.
Love,
Torry
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:35 pm (UTC)love ya back,
el
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Date: 2009-08-04 05:13 pm (UTC)i was slightly confused about the pov in the last part.cause of this:"It was a great end to my week having Ennis in my end."i thought it was Jack pov but then:I rolled over and looked into those deep-blue eyes set me right.it is Ennis pov right?
sweet ending.thank you.
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:23 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 05:22 pm (UTC)(I was a bit confused by the POV in the second section, the "I" voice seemed to be both of them - was that deliberate?)
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:37 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 06:00 pm (UTC)--Oh yeah! This was great, just wonderful! I've really enjoyed this; thank you so very much for sharing it. :)
hugs!
Sam
PS. Is there any chance at all for a sequel?
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:39 pm (UTC)el
The Weathermen part 18 Final Chapter
Date: 2009-08-04 06:36 pm (UTC)I'm so sorry to see this gem of a story come to an end...but boy...what a wonderful, hilarious and inventive story. What a GREAT, GREAT read. Thanks for sharing!!
george
Re: The Weathermen part 18 Final Chapter
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:08 pm (UTC)Thank you!
Linda
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Date: 2009-08-04 07:41 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 08:35 pm (UTC)This was so cool!
XO
Donna
BTW, the link to Chapter 15 on the posting with the final index is broken.
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Date: 2009-08-04 08:58 pm (UTC)Glad you like it and thanks for taking time to comment.
el
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Date: 2009-08-04 09:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-04 10:15 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 10:20 pm (UTC)Thanks so much
Hugs to you
Joanne XXX
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Date: 2009-08-04 11:16 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and staying with this.
el
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Date: 2009-08-04 11:17 pm (UTC)It was a great end to my week having Jack in my end. And he couldn't have come at a better time.
LOL. Well, all's well that ends well, right? I loved their three little words and four little words - and here's two little words - thank you!!
Marie
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Date: 2009-08-05 11:37 am (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-04 11:52 pm (UTC)Camilla
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Date: 2009-08-05 11:38 am (UTC)Thanks for the feedback.
el
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Date: 2009-08-05 01:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-05 11:40 am (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-05 11:42 am (UTC)You'll be hearing from me in the near future. Writing the next chapter of None So Blind right now.
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Date: 2009-08-05 10:46 am (UTC)Sue
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Date: 2009-08-05 11:43 am (UTC)Thanks for reading and taking time to comment.
el
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Date: 2009-08-05 12:38 pm (UTC)Sorry to see it end.
Selina
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Date: 2009-08-06 09:00 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-05 04:05 pm (UTC)Thank you!
HT
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Date: 2009-08-06 09:00 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-05 04:10 pm (UTC)fl.
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Date: 2009-08-06 09:01 pm (UTC)el
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Date: 2009-08-13 10:38 am (UTC)What a great way to finish with a 'I love you' followed by ""Now let me hear those other three words."...."fuck me harder" that suited this story so well.
Thank you so much.
Lorna
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Date: 2009-08-20 05:22 pm (UTC)Thanks for taking time to comment-- not just now, but all the times you have. It me a lot to me.
Thanks,
el